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[262196] 主题: when i was a little girl
作者: yingzi 标题: when i was a little girl
昵称: yingzi 来自: 192.168.*.*
经验值: 40 发贴时间: 2004年08月06日 23:24:20 (UTC +08:00)
等级: 新手上路 长度: 529字
when i was a little girl
life was simple and full of smile
although it also filled with hardness
but there was so much hope too
 
when i was a little girl
mum and dad worked so hard
maybe they were very tired
but they felt satisfied
cause they expect not much
and knew that their children were making them happy

time really goes too fast
when i turned into an adult
they have grown old
and so much things have changed!
how can i find the lost goldendays

just hope everything will be fine tomorrow
and god will bless our family 
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作者: lidun 标题: Re: when i was a little girl
昵称: 晚晚*LostMemory 来自: 218.6.*.*
经验值: 1573 发贴时间: 2004年08月07日 21:04:14 (UTC +08:00)
等级: 小有作为 长度: 22字
很清新,很宁静的感觉!
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作者: sounionblue 标题: Re: when i was a little girl
昵称: sounionblue 来自: 218.78.*.*
经验值: 1351 发贴时间: 2004年08月08日 02:20:38 (UTC +08:00)
等级: 小有作为 长度: 24字
I'm still a little girl.
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作者: xugou 标题: Re: when i was a little girl
昵称: violetrain*新月 来自: 218.81.*.*
经验值: 58 发贴时间: 2004年08月08日 16:55:03 (UTC +08:00)
等级: 初来乍练 长度: 881字
when i was a little girl 
life was simple and full of smile 
although it is filled with hardness 
there was so much hope too 
  
when i was a little girl 
mum and dad worked so hard 
maybe they were very tired 
but they felt satisfied 
'cause they had expected not so much 
and known that their children (were making them happy)

括号里没法改,语法对的,感觉便扭....太便扭了...
 
time really goes too fast 
when i turn into an adult 
they have grown old 
and so much things have changed! 
how can i find the lost goldendays (prime days?)

just wish everything will be fine tomorrow 
and God bless my family 

--
我对新月起誓,愿意经受七难八苦! 
Violet is beautiful! 
Stars are beautiful,too! 
狂傲------我的标志  
恐惧------我的内在  
孤独------我的痛苦  
沉默------我的权利  
音乐------我的爱好  
星星------我的伴侣  
热情------我的弱点  
出生------我的错误  
死亡------我的宿命  
 

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作者: guiltyfeet 标题: Re: when i was a little girl
昵称: 右手眉开眼笑中 来自: 218.78.*.*
经验值: 4822 发贴时间: 2004年08月08日 20:51:21 (UTC +08:00)
等级: 对答如流 长度: 40字
总归都会过去的.
看看这么多人,不都过来了.
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